← Back to context Comment by Angostura 16 years ago I think Safire would probably have suggested that you used "died" rather than "passed on". No? 1 comment Angostura Reply rtperson 16 years ago He would also have suggested a comma after "sadly," so that it's obvious that it's the writer's comment, rather than a modifier on the way Safire died.
rtperson 16 years ago He would also have suggested a comma after "sadly," so that it's obvious that it's the writer's comment, rather than a modifier on the way Safire died.
He would also have suggested a comma after "sadly," so that it's obvious that it's the writer's comment, rather than a modifier on the way Safire died.