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Comment by zestyping

4 years ago

This looks beautiful, except I have no idea why there are rows of tiny faces under some of the items. It's not at all clear what they mean, and they make the page ugly (in my opinion) by messing up the composition.

As the only circular objects on the page, as numerous as they are, and as intensely saturated blobs on an otherwise calm, white document, they are incredibly loud. They're so loud that they almost make it harder to read the text. Just get rid of them.