Comment by boomlinde
3 days ago
Yes, the original post has the vibe of something a human wrote to express an idea, while your version has the vibe of meandering, insincere, sycophantic AI slop that obfuscates the original idea in service of congratulating everything.
Both express the same basic criticism; you've just replaced the neutral tone with something that's perhaps more effective as a vomitory than as a criticism.
Rather than AI slop the above comes across to me as genuine corpospeak. I guess the task wasn't so much generation as it was translation. I found myself simultaneously impressed and disgusted.
I wonder how well an automated tool to go in the reverse direction would work in practice? With an accompanying style transfer GAN to rewrite the Corporate Memphis hellscape.