Comment by danabramov
9 hours ago
From my perspective, there is no chaff. I've already the read the entire thing from top to bottom over 20 times (as I usually do with my writing), I've done several full edit passes, and I've removed everything inessential that I could find. The rest is what I wanted to be included into this article.
I know my style is verbose but I try to include enough details to substantiate the argument at the level that I feel confident it fully stands for itself. If others find something useful in it, I trust that they can riff on those bits or simplify.
For the commenters who have made similar comments, I'd be curious to hear what they think could be cut. I suspect different readers will have different opinions on this, which means it's probably a good thing you didn't make cuts.