Comment by ShroudedNight
8 hours ago
"I think" is explicitly disclaiming authority. Omitting it changes the social signaling of the response significantly.
Switching "wooden" for "a bit unnatural" also does a disservice: "wooden" describes a specific quality of deviance.
Over-all, I would definitely consider the revision stiffer and more reserved than the original.
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