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Comment by Sharlin

3 days ago

There's nothing inherently better about the edited version. It's just saying the same thing with synonyms substituted, at a slightly more formal but less personal register. HN comments are not academic text, colloquial turns of phrase are perfectly fine and expected.

> There's nothing inherently better about the edited version.

Easier to read ==> More likely to be read.

No, it's not saying the same thing, especially if the tool is telling you that your statement is ambiguous and should be rephrased.

  • Easier to read is mostly related with predictability of the text. Any time the brain mispredicts the next word, you'd have to go back and re-read.

    Unless you are purposely train on that specific way to expression, it ain't easier to read.

    • I don't know why this is confusing. If I forget to put the "not" qualifier in a sentence, do we agree that it can confuse (or worse, mislead) the reader?

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  • More formal register doesn’t mean easier to read or understand. To many people the exact opposite is the case.

    • > More formal register doesn’t mean easier to read or understand.

      And who is advocating for a more formal register?