Comment by croemer
11 hours ago
Here's one tell-tale of many: "No alarm, no program light."
Another one: "Two instructions are missing: [...] Four bytes."
One more: "The defensive coding hid the problem, but it didn’t eliminate it."
11 hours ago
Here's one tell-tale of many: "No alarm, no program light."
Another one: "Two instructions are missing: [...] Four bytes."
One more: "The defensive coding hid the problem, but it didn’t eliminate it."
That's just writing. I frequently write like that.
This insistence that certain stylistics patterns are "tell-tale" signs that an article was written by AI makes no sense, particularly when you consider that whatever stylistic ticks an LLM may possess are a result of it being trained on human writing.
These are just some of the good examples I found.
My hunch that this is substantially LLM-generated is based on more than that.
In my head it's like a Bayesian classifier, you look at all the sentences and judge whether each is more or less likely to be LLM vs human generated. Then you add prior information like that the author did the research using Claude - which increases the likelihood that they also use Claude for writing.
Maybe your detector just isn't so sensitive (yet) or maybe I'm wrong but I have pretty high confidence at least 10% of sentences were LLM-generated.
Yes, the stylistic patterns exist in human speech but RLHF has increased their frequency. Also, LLM writing has a certain monotonicity that human writing often lacks. Which is not surprising: the machine generates more or less the most likely text in an algorithmic manner. Humans don't. They wrote a few sentences, then get a coffee, sleep, write a few more. That creates more variety than an LLM can.
Fun exercise: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:AI_or_not_quiz
Here's an alternative way of thinking about this...
Someone probably expended a lot of time and effort planning, thinking about, and writing an interesting article, and then you stroll by and casually accuse them of being a bone idle cheat, with no supporting evidence other than your "sensitive detector" and a bunch of hand-wavy nonsense that adds up to naught.
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Those aren’t good examples - that’s just LLMs living for free in your head.
I am reminded of the Simpsons episode in which Principal Skinner tries to pass off the hamburgers from a near-by fast food restaurant for an old family recipe, 'steamed hams,' and his guest's probing into the kitchen mishaps is met with increasingly incredible explanations.
I’m so glad the witch hunt has moved on to phrasing so I get less grief for my em dashes.
See also: “I'm Kenyan. I Don't Write Like ChatGPT. ChatGPT Writes Like Me” by Marcus Olang', https://marcusolang.substack.com/p/im-kenyan-i-dont-write-li...
For what it’s worth, Pangram reports that Marcus’ article is 100% LLM-written: https://www.pangram.com/history/640288b9-e16b-4f76-a730-8000...
In theory, wouldn't be too hard be to settle the question if whether he used ChatGPT to write it: get Olang to write a few paragraphs by hand, then have people judge (blindly) if it's the same style as the article. Which one sounds more like ChatGPT.
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I hate that I can’t write em dashes freely anymore without people accusing the writing of being AI generated.
Even though they are perfect for usage in writing down thoughts and notes.
One thing you can try⸺admittedly it's not quite correct⸺is replacing them with a two-em dash. I've never seen an AI use one, and it looks pretty funky.
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I have nothing against em dashes. As long as your writing is human, experienced readers will be able to tell it's human. Only less experienced ones will use all or nothing rules. Em dashes just increase the likelihood that the text was LLM generated. They aren't proof.
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Why do you care what others accuse you of?
No, it’s pretty obviously AI written. Not sure why you’re running so much interference for them…are you affiliated with this company?
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This is my exact writing style - I'm screwed.
I doubt you write like that. Where can I find your writing other than your comments which IMO don't read like the blog post?
Justify your doubt.
This is just writing; terse maybe and maybe not grammatically correct, but people write like that.
It's not just terseness, it's the rhythm and "it's not x, it's y".
In fact, the latter is the opposite of terseness. LLMs love to tell you what things are not way more than people do.
See https://www.blakestockton.com/dont-write-like-ai-1-101-negat...
(The irony that I started with "it's not just" isn't lost on me)
> (The irony that I started with "it's not just" isn't lost on me)
But an LLM wouldn't write "It's not just X, it's the Y and Z". No disrespect to your writing intended, but adding that extra clause adds just the slightest bit of natural slack to the flow of the sentence, whereas everything LLMs generate comes out like marketing copy that's trying to be as punchy and cloying as possible at all times.
"Here’s how the bug might have manifested."