Comment by copypaper

Yea after skimming the samples on Amazon I noticed that nearly every single sentence had at least one comma in it (adding zero value). It feels like I'm reading someones thoughts.

Personally, I love abusing commas for comments and shitposting, but they should be avoided in informative resources like books, otherwise, it looks like a word salad. Say your thoughts and ideas with boldness and certainty.

But hey you write better than I did at 18, so I ain't judging. Just trying to provide helpful feedback for you (the op) to improve on.