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Comment by sphars

1 day ago

To be fair, that's a direct quote from Vercel themselves introducing Geist Pixel: https://vercel.com/blog/introducing-geist-pixel

ya because Vercel generated the copy with an LLM

  • Some people wrote like that before LLMs polluted the water.

    Just like people used em dashes before LLMs.

    I used bullet points heavily before LLMs.

    • I felt personally attacked when LLMs came out: I'm an avid user of "—", bullets, numbered lists, and the word "delve". It's been a miserable couple of years.

    • Many many years ago I wrote a book for Apress, and the style guide for that instilled in me a lot of practices that now make my writing feel LLM-ish to some readers:

      - Use bulleted lists, but always introduce and conclude a list with prose; a list can't immediately follow a heading or end a section.

      - Use a mix of long and short sentences; in long sentences with parentheticals, use a mix of commas, parens, semicolons, and em dashes.

      - With multiple continuous blocks of prose that aren't naturally broken up by an illustration or heading, start a paragraph with an inline bold statement to help anchor the reader.

    • LLMs write like that because people wrote like that. Enough, unfortunately for my remaining love of humanity, to cause the LLMs to adopt the quirk.

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    • For sure, but I don't think I'm going to give Vercel benefit of the doubt that they aren't writing their copy with an LLM.