Comment by verisimi

I'm saying that the story reads like the type of thing I enjoyed reading and writing about when I was around 12 years old. I think I recognise lots of narrative tricks in play, to get the excitement levels up. Which is entirely unlike reality.

You are of course free to defend this article as truth or whatever. However, if I see these sorts of tricks in play, I reserve the right to dismiss it as a manipulative narrative. I also reserve the right to express my opinion, esp if I am able to easily support my assertion using the provided text itself.

Do you realise that even the news is a manipulation? You are free to be curious about the 'facts' that are presented to you.