Comment by bambax

I like Mentour Pilot but the outcome of the incident is only revealed at the end.

Admiral Cloudberg's articles are more like Columbo: they start with what happened, and then go back in time to find out and explain all the little details that caused it. In a way it's much more logical that way.

Mentour Pilot constantly has to say "remember this, it will prove important later". But we don't know why it's important, and so we don't remember, and as a result the narrative is much less clear.