Comment by triyambakam
1 month ago
Smells like LLM written. Maybe useful advice though. Who actually writes the hyphen in compound modifiers (or even knows what that is)? E.g. "team-level" instead of "team level".
> I couldn't have been happier.
And phrases like this.
Definitely, although maybe it's ok here. I'm not sure. The opening paragraph doesn't feel like it. The rest could be condensed to 1 or 2 paragraphs and it would better communicate the idea.
It's not too bad because it's not too long, but I think it's worse than if the human had just written a second part to the post about the length of the first part.
Notice there's all these needless sections that have the LLM-form.
> What "Taking the Position" Actually Looks Like
> Why Sustained Performance Is What Counts
> The Responsibility-First Mindset
And each has this opening paragraph setup then a one sentence paragraph contradicting or reinforcing it, which is simultaneously punchy and pure fluff.
> I couldn't have been happier.
> And I mean sustained.
> But that's backward.
I can't really tell how much the author cares about any given bit of text beyond the starting paragraph because it's all expressed with too many words that don't say anything, but just evoke the marketing/linkedin-speak, giving everything too much weight.
good observations of AIGC form here
Continually sad to see each day that the vast majority of users cannot classify
Honestly that just seems like normal English.
To refer to something as "team-level" seems so absurdly unspectacular, relative to the other kinds of signals that exist for sussing out AI writing, that I'm surprised it was worthy of mentioning at all.
It's proper grammar but I have only ever seen journalists use it. It is a strong signal in my experience
Maybe so but in that case hats off to the LLM for writing a pretty good article.
Uh. I'd use a hyphen there. I'm not an LLM. At least, I don't think I am. But, who knows?