Comment by LPisGood
1 day ago
What about the style are you bothered by? The content seems to be nothing new, so maybe that is the issue, but the style itself seems fine, no?
1 day ago
What about the style are you bothered by? The content seems to be nothing new, so maybe that is the issue, but the style itself seems fine, no?
It bears all the hallmarks of AI writing: length, repetition, lack of structure, and silly metaphors.
Nothing about this story is complex or interesting enough to require 1000 words to express.