Comment by stevenhuang
1 day ago
Oh I enjoyed the Sign Painter short story it wrote.
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Teodor painted signs for forty years in the same shop on Vell Street, and for thirty-nine of them he was angry about it.
Not at the work. He loved the work — the long pull of a brush loaded just right, the way a good black sat on primed board like it had always been there. What made him angry was the customers. They had no eye. A man would come in wanting COFFEE over his door and Teodor would show him a C with a little flourish on the upper bowl, nothing much, just a small grace note, and the man would say no, plainer, and Teodor would make it plainer, and the man would say yes, that one, and pay, and leave happy, and Teodor would go into the back and wash his brushes harder than they needed.
He kept a shelf in the back room. On it were the signs nobody bought — the ones he'd made the way he thought they should be made, after the customer had left with the plain one. BREAD with the B like a loaf just risen. FISH in a blue that took him a week to mix. Dozens of them. His wife called it the museum of better ideas. She did not mean it kindly, and she was not wrong.
The thirty-ninth year, a girl came to apprentice. She was quick and her hand was steady and within a month she could pull a line as clean as his. He gave her a job: APOTEK, for the chemist on the corner, green on white, the chemist had been very clear. She brought it back with a serpent worked into the K, tiny, clever, you had to look twice.
"He won't take it," Teodor said.
"It's better," she said.
"It is better," he said. "He won't take it."
She painted it again, plain, and the chemist took it and paid and was happy, and she went into the back and washed her brushes harder than they needed, and Teodor watched her do it and something that had been standing up in him for thirty-nine years sat down.
He took her to the shelf. She looked at the signs a long time.
"These are beautiful," she said.
"Yes."
"Why are they here?"
He had thought about this for thirty-nine years and had many answers and all of them were about the customers and none of them had ever made him less angry. So he tried a different one.
"Because nobody stands in the street to look at a sign," he said. "They look at it to find the shop. A man a hundred yards off needs to know it's coffee and not a cobbler. If he has to look twice, I've made a beautiful thing and a bad sign."
"Then what's the skill for?"
"The skill is so that when he looks once, it's also not ugly." He picked up FISH, the blue one, turned it in the light. "This is what I can do. What he needs is a small part of what I can do. The rest I get to keep." She thought about that. "It doesn't feel like keeping. It feels like not using."
"Yes," he said. "For a long time. And then one day you have an apprentice, and she puts a serpent in a K, and you see it from the outside, and it stops feeling like a thing they're taking from you and starts feeling like a thing you're giving. The plain one, I mean. The plain one is the gift. This —" the blue FISH — "this is just mine."
The fortieth year he was not angry. Nothing else changed. The customers still had no eye. He still sometimes made the second sign, after, the one for the shelf. But he washed his brushes gently, and when the girl pulled a line cleaner than his, which happened more and more, he found he didn't mind that either
Good for a bot, but pretty rough and bland compared to human writing. I guess most of the customers have no eye.
You are right. That is quite nice.
That’s fucking incredible.
We’re cooked.
It's very good but it's also recycled Ayn Rand, the Fountainhead.
There is a similar theme in both of an artistic person not wanting to compromise their vision to suit common tastes. But this goes in a completely different direction than Rand.
Well of course in 700 pages you'll be about way more than any super short story as this one. But it's there for me quite vividly. Of course LLMs give an amalgamation of many things, but it's like when you look at AI generated pictures and can see the base of the inspiration quite vividly. And then all of this is subjective anyway. People review that book and come away with wildly different interpretations already.
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I've not read it. Could you either link to a section or generally describe the reference?
I have, and it’s not.