Comment by cm2012
12 hours ago
This would be a masterpiece if it was half as long, the second half is not as convincing or compelling.
12 hours ago
This would be a masterpiece if it was half as long, the second half is not as convincing or compelling.
Indeed, the leap takes place in the second half.
> Cruel. But you said it yourself, who wants to apologize to weights?
How did we leap to this? There's nothing to apologize to. They're weights.
"There's nothing to apologize to. They're weights."
It's nearly a line-by-line rephrasing of another story that's linked at the top. In the second half it takes less creative liberties and sticks closer and closer to the original meat-based text.